When it is, it is
And when it's not, it's not
And when you do believe it is
Consider that it's not.
When you're up, you're up
And when you're down, you're down
And sometimes when you're going up
You're also coming down.
When it's bad, it's bad
And when it's good, it's good
And if it's only sort of bad
It might be sort of good.
When you know, you know
And when you don't, you don't
And if you think you maybe know
It may be that you don't.
When it's there, it's there
And when it's gone, it's gone
And if it's only halfway there
It's only halfway gone.














Comments
I really like what you're trying to say with this poem, I just think you can do a much better job of expressing the idea with different words. I hope you let the critique help you. Best of luck in all your future work!
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All knowledge is currency, you just have to know where to use it.
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We were one among the Fence.
P.S. Nice gallery.
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All knowledge is currency, you just have to know where to use it.
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